dus10's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[=Teddy 2=]

cool

this is a really good flash. I think a few things changed could make it hit "blue"... The sonds kinda speedup to fast to not be asble to understande it, the bears arm when playing the gutair(looks lazy) some mouths and other things im missing, but overall you did alot of good things animation wisw. I LOVE THE TOASTER BEAR! lol

[Utopia]

ok

id have to say i can tell there was alot of time spent on this and it is better than ur average submission. It had decent graphics but the animations werent that smooth and correct+ it was ALOT of the same monotonouse stuff. Not alot of action and a dumb ending, I have to say im disapointed to see this make front page. Add a little more story and reasoning, or at least make me care for the character by his body language and expressions. Music went along with the boring feel

Vuny responds:

The ending is what connected it all, you didn't catch it. But stick to you silly and willies. Not every one can enjoy a serious piece. lol

[Samurai Bob Trailor]

this could be good

this "trailer" doesnt really show much of anything, no story, no action, no humor.. just walking...not good for a trailer. If u want people to remember ur stuff u need to make a funny thing to end on, or a cool fight scene but thats done allot. Not very original name, unless ur making it a comedy..poking fun of samari jak then it would be neat. If u work harder(do all fpf,or better graphics) and add some humor(could be dry humor) this would be a cool little series. You can do it!

xEnOXeNo responds:

*note Crazy Bob the main charter is a seres done by me this is just a installment*

[Primal War 04]

good

this is a nice series, ...but u forgot A LOADING SCREEN... the movie frooze as i watched it... if iz u id put one of NGs in there and update this. Nice job.

[Forumites Flash of Doom]

crappy

this had desent art and animation but if there was a category for story, u would fial, i found no humor in this and it was very drawn out, i could not finish it... you could either take this as constuctive critisism or think im just being mean... just because you can animate doesnt make ur movie entertaining... at leat not in ur case.

ForumitesTeam responds:

It would be difficult for me to take such a poorly written review as constructive criticism. Anyways, in the author comments I clearly said that this flash wasn't all that great and I never said just because I could animate meant that the movie would be entertaining. Next time try giving advice on how to improve it, that would be constructive criticism.

[The Spatula!]

cool song

your flash wasnt anything special, but it was very smooth and it looked clean, i love that song u made... u should post it to the audio portal so people can download it.

[The Gayest Showdown]

lol

well it was a shitty flash and terrible song... but it was funny to see you fail, but i got that u were making fun of ultimate showdown. not a big laugh, just a ha in my head

[The East Coast Saints]

well...

I think i can tell u had something funny planed for this flash but when u made it you didnt add enough detail to make it funny or understandable. I didnt care to much for ur style although it was consistant. I think this was a decent movie from the outside but when ut comes to story and humor, take more planning and build up the funny parts. I hope u can take constructive critisism

[-MASS-]

BRA freakin BRO

this was awesome. very well done, nice message to FOMY, that stupid thing. funny and hurtful, nice job!

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

theres spike and tike
droopy and dripple
c'mon and have some fun

[Trichinosis]

great

i love ur style, its very clean, it seems so flawless. Your stuff is very wierd, but with alot of good points. great job